There are several different areas of the fan fiction sites that support Jenkins’ argument, the first of which has to be the fan community’s informal instruction of new writers (188). The example given in the book is the Sugar Quill “beta reading,” a process which involves fans submitting rough drafts to the testers so they can “smooth out bugs” and “take them to the next level” (188). They emphasize their offer of GENTLE constructive criticism and technical editing to give the authors more confidence. The Sugar Quill also provides genre classifications of how different readers might want to engage with the text, like “what ifs” and postulations about what happens during the summer (190). They do, however, hold writers to a “strict literal interpretation” of Rowling’s text (190). Jenkins also argues that by building on media that already exists, kids are able to devote more attention to learning and mastering their writing and communication skills (191). Writers on the fan fiction sites have also said that writing about someone else’s characters rather than drawing on their own experience allows them a certain critical distance to “reflect on what they were trying to express” (191).
I have to say that I disagree with half of Jenkins’ argument in this section of the chapter. I do not think that it is very likely that writers in fan fiction communities are improving more than they would in school. It also does not seem very likely that school is actually detrimental to these fan fiction community kids because it is limiting their feedback and exposure to things they like (which in turn causes them to devote more attention). While these communities are helpful in some ways, they are harmful in more important and significant ones. Critical feedback is an integral part of becoming a better writer. The processes described by these “beta readers” (188, 189) are too watered down to be of much help to someone who was already lost or not motivated enough to put forth the effort to figure out what they did wrong.
Writing in fan fiction communities is also detrimental to a school environment because it detracts kids’ attention from what is going on in class. This sentence at the top of page 193 really illustrates this point: “Some teens have confessed to smuggling drafts of stories to school…and editing them during class.” The last sentence in the paragraph states that the fans can’t wait for school to get out so they can focus on their writing, but who’s to say they are even practicing the right things? They may not even be trying to have their stories edited, so they may have no idea what they’re doing wrong.